Macabre Mansion Beta

greetings all! This is where I will be receiving feedback for my latest project, macabre mansion! Please let me know what you think would be some improvements I can make on my game! While all suggestions are appreciated, I'm mostly interested in ways to improve the story, whether it be depth or flow, or whatever you think would help. Grammar assistance is also appreciated. thanks a million everyone! here is the link:

Billy Towers